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Post by misterpoet on Aug 2, 2006 18:42:54 GMT -5
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i dance --alone in a dark room --invisible.
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my mind stagnates, while i do nothing to try and get you to love me.
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i catch my sanity, as it flees to loneliness.
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kiss and cleanse me deeply.
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to love someone who doesn't love me
it's funny and scary at the same time
because i'll just break inside & no one'll be able to save me.
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i think to myself just one kiss, but one kiss will want me to lead to another.
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Post by ccwhitelighter on Aug 3, 2006 13:50:06 GMT -5
I liked the feel of this moment of time- and for me the I catch my sanity as it flees into loneliness, captures the image.
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Post by Kevin Brian Wright on Aug 3, 2006 16:49:15 GMT -5
Beautiful, appealing write. CHEERS!!
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Post by misterpoet on Aug 4, 2006 5:20:25 GMT -5
CCW : thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it and things! yes! Kevin : Three smiles for your comment! lol. glad you liked it! Thanks! ( by the way : still love the cover! )
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