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Post by thatboweryman on Aug 6, 2006 17:19:40 GMT -5
Little Voice: A Fragment
Within a dream once I saw A sleepless beauty who said, ‘Oh! What vain reflections flow Amidst thine eternal dread.’ Within the darkness she veiled Herself, attired in shadows. Each dress, an unchanging child At conflict with my abode- As mutable as the lyre, Whose dissonant strings perished; From whence this beauty aspires, Denied, due undying rest.
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Post by misterpoet on Aug 6, 2006 17:24:47 GMT -5
I like this one. it really hits the spot. so sad, so deep. i remember when it was just so small. now it's grown into something even more magical!
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Post by thatboweryman on Aug 6, 2006 17:36:07 GMT -5
Thanks very much! Its sooo nie to have a fellow poet to help shape my poetry as it grows into its 'finalling' form- and to do it so altruistically!!!
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