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Post by misterpoet on Aug 4, 2006 5:27:09 GMT -5
when things go blank and fall apart – it all goes black.
black as the night, but is the night really black –
there’s some light, moon, stars or the distant lamp post
but in my head the darkness is thick and no light can shine through even when it’s in front of me.
and the falling apart, everyone and everything shatters, disappears, goes away… and then black.
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Post by Kevin Brian Wright on Aug 4, 2006 7:27:08 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this piece alot..but I think this should be a much longer write then what you have already. Something to think about!
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Post by misterpoet on Aug 4, 2006 9:33:41 GMT -5
Kevin : I wrote it last night after watching "prozac nation"! I like that movie. I have bi-polar so I wrote it about being depressed! I'll see what I can do with the making it longer. I always love a challange!
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