bring me back to break me

[misterpoet]

bring me back
to reality
because this
fantasy
takes me
and turns me
inside-out

and i just
want to
stop it all...

please set me
free,
i want to
realize
how fake it all
really is.

this love
you portray
seems nothing more
then one-night
stands...

so tell me
you feel nothing more
then a kiss and
fuck
so i can
walk away

and
break
so no one else
witness's

my murdering
myself
incompletely.

and all i leave
are shreads
to sweep away
under the rug
eventually
when you find me

and then you can
walk all over me
some more

even though
you'll forget about me...

i'll be your
morality
collecting dust.

[lbrook]

I love this poem you wrote. The poetry that I write has a lot of the same tone. Very emotional. You did a very good job making your emotions into visuals for the reader.

[misterpoet]

thank you very much!
i'd like to see your poetry!

glad you enjoyed this!

lbrook said:

I love this poem you wrote. The poetry that I write has a lot of the same tone. Very emotional. You did a very good job making your emotions into visuals for the reader.